raspberry
give me a raspberry
that tastes so sweet
and show your contempt
for my ideas
when we can't take back
a moment or words
fruit registers
reaction...acknowledgement
spur of the moment
a childish tantrum
less painful to me
than words
that tastes so sweet
and show your contempt
for my ideas
when we can't take back
a moment or words
fruit registers
reaction...acknowledgement
spur of the moment
a childish tantrum
less painful to me
than words
posted by Vickie at 9:27 PM
2 Comments:
Hmmm... this feels incomplete, as a beginning/starting place, it's great - I like the contrast and tension, but It just feels like there's more.
it was kind of a spur of the moment thing. I don't know which came first...this or the comment on your blog. I was feeling like I deserved a raspberry. So, I should do something with it?
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