Sunday, July 03, 2005

Dawn

Dawn rises before me
as she strips the night
slowly from her shoulders.
Darkness falls like a shroud
of gossamer in silver
to land at her feet.

She stretches like a cat
awakened from a nap
and purrs almost as one.
As she wakens, light
places her in the shadow
of the perfect woman.

The sun peeks
above the horizon
to catch her magnificence.
Her arms reach out
to embrace the start
of yet another day.

4 Comments:

Blogger e said...

Lovely, V! Lots of scrumptious imagery in this one. I dig it. :o)

July 04, 2005 7:49 AM  
Blogger Vickie said...

Wow, lovely comment, thank you!

July 04, 2005 11:08 AM  
Blogger Erin said...

oh damn V, you struck gold with this one! Really just wonderful stuff. That first stanza is sooooo kickass.

*claps*

July 04, 2005 9:34 PM  
Blogger Vickie said...

Well, thank you. I usually know I'm on the right track when both of you respond with such wonderful comments...lol

July 05, 2005 10:07 AM  

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