Tuesday, September 27, 2005

Gentle Pool

Gentle rain
washes me clean
as tears slip from
my eyes to pool
at my feet.

10 Comments:

Blogger rahian2k said...

some really beautiful lines there Vickie!...

keep up the good work,

-Rahi

September 27, 2005 9:59 PM  
Blogger Erin said...

Ah, the Modicum comes naturally to you lol. I am still piddling with a couple.

September 28, 2005 12:00 AM  
Blogger Sir James Eric Watkins said...

I dig. But on the same lines as mentioned regarding “Forever Delightful:”

If you place a comma after clean and come up with a variation of the third line to connect, I think you’ll serve this piece very well.

September 28, 2005 12:41 AM  
Blogger Vickie said...

Thank you all. James, I did something a bit different. See what you think.

September 28, 2005 4:50 PM  
Blogger Sir James Eric Watkins said...

"Lights out! Uh hu! Dance, Dance, Dance!"

In other words, I would say this is a fine example of a Modicum.

~ James

September 28, 2005 5:36 PM  
Blogger Vickie said...

Thank you, my good sir. Do you rumba?

September 28, 2005 9:03 PM  
Blogger Sir James Eric Watkins said...

I do much more than that. It's quite a site.

September 30, 2005 6:27 PM  
Blogger Vickie said...

You owe me one...but I really don't do much dancing...lol

September 30, 2005 8:42 PM  
Blogger Sir James Eric Watkins said...

How about chess?

October 02, 2005 12:06 PM  
Blogger Vickie said...

I haven't played in years...

October 02, 2005 1:39 PM  

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