Hold Me
Hold me tight
as your warmth seeps
into my heart
keeping me safe
in your arms.
as your warmth seeps
into my heart
keeping me safe
in your arms.
posted by Vickie at 9:47 PM
I'm Vickie and I live in Ohio. This is my poetry from this year. If you would like to critique something I've written or simply leave a comment, all are welcome.
posted by Vickie at 9:47 PM
3 Comments:
I like what you've done with the title of this one, a beautiful lope hole of sorts.
Love, be well.
~ James
Again, along those same lines of thought, I suggest placing a comma after “heart,” while replacing “Keep me safely” with keeping me safe, supplying you with the desired affect.
"But that's just my opinion. I could be wrong." ~ Dennis Miller
And so it shall be...
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