Forever Delightful
Forever new,
a light caress
of lips against
sensitive skin--
delightful.
a light caress
of lips against
sensitive skin--
delightful.
posted by Vickie at 9:41 PM
I'm Vickie and I live in Ohio. This is my poetry from this year. If you would like to critique something I've written or simply leave a comment, all are welcome.
posted by Vickie at 9:41 PM
2 Comments:
I like all these. But I must say that this one holds truest to form, well done. This one, without a doubt, is as good as any I’ve revealed.
You see, although not stated in the criteria, only by example, a modicum is a continuous stream, rather than broken up by sentences. And if you read these three pieces aloud, you will, most likely, find that this approach reads smoother and adds depth as well.
Bravo!
Thank you, James. I also appreciate the clarification. I mean no injustice to the form. It shall be fixed!
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