Masquerade
Two days of frustration
wears thin on my patience
as I struggle to move forward.
A simple count should never
change costume midstream.
A masquerade is only fun
as long as there is mystery.
Carry the charade too far,
and temperatures will rise
causing the blood to simmer.
Beware, lest the pot boil.
wears thin on my patience
as I struggle to move forward.
A simple count should never
change costume midstream.
A masquerade is only fun
as long as there is mystery.
Carry the charade too far,
and temperatures will rise
causing the blood to simmer.
Beware, lest the pot boil.
posted by Vickie at 8:29 PM
2 Comments:
I feel guilty for not "being around" - but I also feel out of the loop because I have no idea what this is about, and generally, I recognize a something or someone in your work.
ok, my only suggestions for this are:
in S2 L5, the "to" causes your flow to wobble a bit, and I think maybe a comma after beware.
Otherwise, I think this does a good job of conveying the emotion.
BTW, hi V! How are you!?
ML~
~E
How's that? I just had a frustrating couple of days working on a project at work. I took it out on the page...
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