Tuesday, August 23, 2005

Take Me

Take me into your bed
and become my blanket;
warm my body with yours.
Trace my curves gently
with tongue and fingers;
be firm with what is yours.

Show some tenderness
to my sensitive areas--
my ears, nose, and eyes.
Flutter your lashes
knowingly and I will
respond in kind.

Slowly lower yourself
into my welcoming pool.
We will swim aloft.
The stars await our arrival
amidst the cloud and moon.
Stay with me tonight.

3 Comments:

Blogger Erin said...

not big on "shall" - it's a bit archaic for the rest, but otherwise, very sensuous and gentle.

August 24, 2005 1:21 AM  
Blogger Red said...

I agree with erin, very sensual.

August 24, 2005 6:50 AM  
Blogger Vickie said...

E~
The shall has been changed to will. I'm not entirely sure I agree with the archiac nature of the word, but since you mentioned it, I can live with will.

Thanks, as always, E!

Red,

Thank you.

August 24, 2005 8:27 PM  

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