Sunday, May 29, 2005

Hollow

it leaves me hollow
fills me with profound darkness
while the sun shines bright

such contrast deludes
such brightness wasted

2 Comments:

Blogger Erin said...

Spring does this to me sometimes. . . I wonder why that is? Nice tanka though, somehow feels dark, in all that brightness.

May 29, 2005 5:55 PM  
Blogger Vickie said...

MTC does this to me. And having no visitors to the blogs... Shit happens.

May 29, 2005 6:09 PM  

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