Challenge
I awoke a bit doddled
and pressed my hand
mouthward to suppress
the scream wedged
firmly in my throat.
Caught between the rock
of reality and the roll
of ocean waves, my stomach
heaved ho and struggled
to pull me under.
I scribbled my last wish
on the closest available
scrap of parchment, a book,
and squished all thoughts
of normalcy today.
and pressed my hand
mouthward to suppress
the scream wedged
firmly in my throat.
Caught between the rock
of reality and the roll
of ocean waves, my stomach
heaved ho and struggled
to pull me under.
I scribbled my last wish
on the closest available
scrap of parchment, a book,
and squished all thoughts
of normalcy today.
4 Comments:
haha I think I had a different list! Good job here though. :)
Thanks, E. Now that this comments magically appeared, I can breathe a little easier. The challenge was fun. I actually got to write it while I was at work.
That second strophe needs some work, I'm talking about my stomach. Does it pull me under or do the waves...maybe both?
ah, maybe that will do.
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