Sparkle and Flash
A sparkle and flash
was all I saw when she
passed me on the street.
Curious to know the source,
I followed some distance back.
I saw the fireworks again.
The phenomena came from her hand
adorned with a rock. Light found
her ring as attractive as I.
I was blinded by her elegance
based solely on her hand; never
once did I look upon her face.
Someone thought she was a beauty
with a gift the size of that; little
did I know she bought it for herself.
was all I saw when she
passed me on the street.
Curious to know the source,
I followed some distance back.
I saw the fireworks again.
The phenomena came from her hand
adorned with a rock. Light found
her ring as attractive as I.
I was blinded by her elegance
based solely on her hand; never
once did I look upon her face.
Someone thought she was a beauty
with a gift the size of that; little
did I know she bought it for herself.
posted by Vickie at 4:02 PM
3 Comments:
This one reminds me of the prompt/pic we had when you wrote Storm. . . took me a minute to realize it was her ring.
Do you mean "adorned" rather than adorn?
It is adorned. The prompt for this was sparkle and flash.
I revised to actually mention the ring. I hope this helps.
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