Rain
dilute the salt of my tears;
wash away the pain.
Revised--
Pour raindrops on me,
dilute the salt of my tears
and erase the pain.
Original--
Pour raindrops on me,
cover the tracks of my tears
so no one will know.
I'm Vickie and I live in Ohio. This is my poetry from this year. If you would like to critique something I've written or simply leave a comment, all are welcome.